This reminds me of the time we were leaving England frighteningly early in the morning and the entire countryside was surrounded by mist.
You use a lot of adjectives and have a pretty good rhythm and rhyme scheme, but some of the adjectives seem...unfulfilled? I like to throw down metaphors and similes a lot. So...enveloping like what?
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This reminds me of the time we were leaving England frighteningly early in the morning and the entire countryside was surrounded by mist.
You use a lot of adjectives and have a pretty good rhythm and rhyme scheme, but some of the adjectives seem...unfulfilled? I like to throw down metaphors and similes a lot. So...enveloping like what?
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