“Stand and fight you knave!”
No one ever accepts my challenges. I am the bravest in the castle, there is none better than me in a fight. Yet they blithe ignore my prowess in battle and my honor as a knight. They point and laugh at me, ME the greatest swordsman who ever lived inside or outside of a painting.
The knight in the painting trips over his armored feet and lands in a heap beside his horse, trying to rise he gets his sword caught in the straps of the horses harness an falls again, panting with exhaustion.
2 comments:
Wow. One of the paintings. I like it. Some random typos and whatnot, but funny. The switch in perspective between paragraphs was initially jarring, but on re-read the white space really helped. Well done!
sorry, as you know my grammar and structure was always a little shaky
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