Allissa was ready to go for it, she was tired of waiting, of being the one left out, the one to sit home at night on the weekends. A storm was brewing and she was going to be ready for it.
Humidity is rising - Barometer's getting low
According to all sources, the street's the place to go
She carefully applied her makeup, and fixed her hair. Pulling on her sexiest outfit, a little leather number, she strode confidently out her door.
Cause tonight for the first time
Just about half-past ten.
It was a little before ten, so she had a while yet to wait, but her friend assured her that come ten thirty; you could hardly move because there were so many guys, but right now the club was practically empty.
For the first time in history
It's gonna start raining men.
It was almost time.
I'm gonna go out to run and let myself get
Absolutely soaking wet!
Allissa could not believe her eyes, it was like a floodgate had been breached, and they were all flowing into one place.
Tall, blond, dark and lean
Rough and tough and strong and mean.
She was ready to find someone.
(okay, I couldn't resist doing this one, it is just to much fun. Here is the video that I like the most and here are the Lyrics)
1 comment:
This was a lot of fun. It's a fun song, and you did well. Nothing like a vixen/femme fatale on the prowl. Those poor men - they won't know what hit them. It was upbeat and perky and a good time.
There is a moment of verb tense confusion. Try to keep all the verbs in the same tense so you don't have too many actions going on at once: "Pulling on her sexiest outfit...she strode confidently out her door" makes her sound like she's getting dressed literally right as she walks out the door.
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