Monday, July 13, 2009

Uncertain

How to express all that I feel;
to make myself understood.
Would you understand,
if I just came out and said it?
A delicate waltz of hints that
protect a fragile soul.
Faltering steps, drawing near and pulling away.
Shifting like a tower of Jenga;
one false move will send it to the ground.




(I'm not sure what is expected from this challenge exactly, so I am expecting the first few days to be a bit rough before I fall into the swing of it.)

1 comment:

Nagi said...

Oooh. I liked the "delicate waltz". You had a lot of solid concrete imagery here, which was good. I think the only thing that sunk for me was the "fragile soul" - too abstract. But I like it.