Minor punctuation on the word "winter's", but that's nitpicking. It does seem oddly incomplete at this point, but as you promise more I'm excited to see more. So far I'm confused as to the general theme of your poem, but I'm guessing this is going to be at least a little epic?
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Sounds sort of like the beginning of a spell.
Minor punctuation on the word "winter's", but that's nitpicking. It does seem oddly incomplete at this point, but as you promise more I'm excited to see more. So far I'm confused as to the general theme of your poem, but I'm guessing this is going to be at least a little epic?
It's an interesting start so far, but try not to rely on the abstract only.
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