Original Telling: Kinoria was dangerous.
Showing:
Kinoria sat to her work, her motions sure as she mixed poisons and powders on her workbench. Turning she selected a thin wicked looking dagger from her collection against the wall and applied a thin coating of one poison to it, it would work quickly.
She crouched in the shadows, waiting for her target to come near, she didn't really care who it was, some drunken, lecherous nobleman most likely. Kinoria stood, spying her target. She stepped out into the light, she was breathtaking, and she beckoned him to go with her. She deftly slipped the dagger into his heart.
1 comment:
Oooh. Good times with the femme fatale. I like how she's different kinds of dangerous - dangerous for her skill in mixing poisons, for her ability to seduce, to kill without caring who the target is. Well done.
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