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Sunday, November 2, 2008
Startled
Startled, Xin looked up at Sheva. He had never said those words to her, had never said them to anyone as far as she knew. Looking around at the crowded campsite she moved closesr to him, and whispered in his ear, "I love you too."
1 comment:
Wow. This was hardcore, intense and short. You turned a fairly ordinary word into a very, very intense moment.
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